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SailorBusch
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 10:20 am    Post subject: Original Song: End Of Story Reply with quote
...it's me again, today offering an original song featuring my ear-hurting voice Razz

This time, it's on SoundCloud because the file was too large for my freehoster.

http://icelink.redio.de/blog/2010/04/end-of-story/

or

http://soundcloud.com/sailorbusch/end-of-story
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Izzhov
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 7:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I like the bassline.

HEY. YOU ARE NOT A BAD SINGER.

YOU ARE A GOOD SINGER.

YOU LIED.

Wow, I really love this. I'm going to play this on AudioSurf right now.

(I could tell a little bit of your accent towards the end though. But still.)
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 7:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Even though you used auto-tune, you are actually a really good singer. I liked the vocals a lot. I'd raise the volume of the drums a lot, I feel like the balance is a little high pitch-wise. But other than that, dang.

Also I could definitely tell his accent, but I still like the voice.
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SailorBusch
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Izzhov wrote:
I like the bassline.

HEY. YOU ARE NOT A BAD SINGER.

YOU ARE A GOOD SINGER.

YOU LIED.

Wow, I really love this. I'm going to play this on AudioSurf right now.

(I could tell a little bit of your accent towards the end though. But still.)

Thank you a lot Izzhov, although I share a different opinion Razz By bassline, you mean the monotone, almost omnipresent piano-thingy?

Oh, and I also liked to Audiosurf it :/ (DAMN, I just wrote Autosurf at first once again!)

Damian wrote:
Even though you used auto-tune, you are actually a really good singer. I liked the vocals a lot. I'd raise the volume of the drums a lot, I feel like the balance is a little high pitch-wise. But other than that, dang.

Also I could definitely tell his accent, but I still like the voice.


Haha xD Now, is that a "subtle" pointer to T-Pain and stuff? I hope that was irony because I didn't autotune at all!
Anyways, thank you, Damian.

About the volume of the drums: Yes, the mixing is really quite bad. I honestly really didn't know what to do, it didn't work out with just pushing around the controllers. Before I used Equo it sounded even worse!

Oh, and concerning my accent: Maybe someday you could tell which words and phonemes exactly sound foreign.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
SailorBusch wrote:
Thank you a lot Izzhov, although I share a different opinion Razz By bassline, you mean the monotone, almost omnipresent piano-thingy?

Yes, that's what I meant. It set a good mood for the song.

SailorBusch wrote:
Oh, and I also liked to Audiosurf it :/ (DAMN, I just wrote Autosurf at first once again!)

You need to figure out how to buy that game... it is so worth it.

Also, I forgot to mention this before: the "we're so fat" part made me laugh. I liked it.

And, could you post lyrics for the song?
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Izzhov wrote:

You need to figure out how to buy that game... it is so worth it.


I still consider.

Izzhov wrote:
Also, I forgot to mention this before: the "we're so fat" part made me laugh. I liked it.

And, could you post lyrics for the song?


That's cool Smile My friend thought it was "we become so fat" or something like that. However, I just posted the lyrics:

http://icelink.redio.de/blog/2010/04/text-zu-end-of-story/
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Oh, you didn't auto-tune? I feel stupid.

Well damn. You're a really good singer then.
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